a thought i had when i thought you were mine

when i'm with you

you have the power to make me believe that

two plus two is five

and our bodies

are not made up of skin and bone

but of flowers and light

and despite the odds

despite the 7,499,999,999 other bodies in the world

ours just so happen

to fit together

perfectly

Reviews

[WoodenChair]

If your poem was an equation it would be something like x= 5-(2+2)

x = 1 - because you are just one together?

is this what you are getting at? and that if you weren't together it wouldn't satisfy your figure, it would be 7,500,001, with the one so obviously on its own when you're not together.

Oh my god! i love mathematical poems!

[Gee]

True Love is a beautiful gift, but very rare.
Enjoyed this, can't be doing with thousands of words that say nowt.

[TL]

thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed it