Alone

You can hold me as tight as you wnt

Be with me every hour of the day

But Ill always find an emptiness

Because you'll always find a way

To break my heart without intention

Reminding me this isn't love

I feel your touch, I look into your eyes

But there's no connection from above

 

I'll always be longing just to feel whats real

These cherades make me come down to hard

In a world that's so surreal

I doubt I'll ever find you, the one to make me complete

So I'll keep on searching, lonely and desperate

Hopefully one day we'll meet

Reviews

[Jb]

use! use! use!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Allen Smuckler]

very poignant and sensitive write, jb
We may look above for guidance and comfort but ...
can only look into our hearts for love..
Do not become desperate...you will most certainly meet the right person for you...when it's the right time..don't rush it, let it overtake you
you'll know it when it's there
I really liked this poem, jb it was heartfelt and honest
couple corrections you may want to address
first line wnt...forgot the "a".....want
and 2nd line..2nd stanza....too instead of to
allen

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This touched my heart to the very core of my soul! your words are written very well! Britterly sad and heart wrentching to be that lonely!

[Sarah]

you express yourself well. this is sad but still very good... well done...

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This is sad, but so well expressed and written.