forever gone

The overwhelming force of the storm
cuases the waves to explode
with breathtaking might
as they break.

You were
           then forever gone.

My soul raw
              missing
                      loving
                            never forgetting.

The day
        - you -
               were taken away.

Reviews

[Neville]

Wow, what a way to go, breathtaking to say the very least........N

[thetish]

Thank you, again. Some days the only way I can free myself of pain is to let it out in words.

[Neville]

The poets curse to be sure..............

[Sumo]

Beautiful, again I feel this pain daily.

[thetish]

Thank you for your sincere words.

[Sumo]

My pleasure, I appreciate your gift and for commenting on my work so that I have had the chance to take in yours.