Fairy Tale

Fairy Tale

Her lucid dreams
reduces steam
It's make believe
King majesty's
Avidly
pressing leaves and adding trees
to pass 
every kettle pot
that you could see
or illusive fairies drop
a wish on Camelot
the dragon's ought to
fit to tell
a tale a coin who fell in Steubenville
which holds 1000 wishing wells
with two to be
peas of jack and pods and rock and
roots of stock and bean
of which will seap and seek
to reach the brew of witches evil jubilee

Reviews

[KTizzle]

I like this. When I think about fairytales, I seldom think about dragons, King Arthur, and witches. I like that this poem took me to a darker, medieval setting instead of a sort of happy place I was expecting. I wish there was some punctuation like a period after the word "steam" and maybe a break to show an entry into dreams. Otherwise I liked the rhythm.

Thanks for posting! Have a great day!

[Ty]

I'm terrible at punctuation with these! I appreciate it though.

[Nariko]

I like seeing the medieval version of fairytales

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Here are the points for this poem. thanks

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Fairy Tale"
Ty,
I found this interesting in its use of many different aspects of fairy tales and their nuance. fairy tales use to be a great part of childhood. I don't know how true that is any more.
From a young age lessons were housed in these tales. Whimsical stories were good then and now.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Darkswing]

That's a lovely poem. Keep up the good work.

[Ty]

Thank you, Thank you.