Magnitude

Magnitude

An extent of efforts and love

Invested vastness

Over Kalahari's vast desert

Veiled in blanketed, searing heat from above

Determined magnitude,

Time

My compass, clock, and stopwatch

I'd travel back through past and Magnolia trails

Thick and heavy

Congruous the latitude and longitude South of the equator

As if I'd evaluated humidity intensively in subtropical lands

I'll forever value your words,

Your peace, your treasure

So what is your view?

How does it measure?

A different perspective

Your energy

Stellar gravitational inter connectivity

A universe that wouldn't abide by the rules

Mind, body, and auras

The soul of Neptune

Or an Elephant in the room

In an effort to reach you in words, instances, and inches

In hopes of achieving emotional connect,

Of scale of long days basking in ambiance and sweeping Moravian Fields

An energy that'd imitate cliffs of Moher

Rigid, steep,

Eminence

Thoughts intricately woven as ancient calligraphy

In fact I've asked my environment

From Serengeti to Heavens,

Where rain fell in plenty

And concluded a metropolitan mind wouldn't know any better

Sometimes emanating ignorance

Imitating distance between a red and blue state

Distinctive

A transcontinental villain dark voyage,

Voices and sea so deep

It'd reverberate and quake

Funneled through tunnels and time

With no escape,

It flooded for miles

Headache of heartache

And still some would swan dive into valleys of pain

And deep ocean trenches

To save as many, they'd repeat this again

Confirmation there's a fraction of humanity left within.

Magnitude.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'A universe that wouldn't abide by the rules
Mind, body, and auras
The soul of Neptune
Or an Elephant in the room
In an effort to reach you in words, instances, and inches.. '

Not entirely sure if this is written with an irate or beautiful pen. Perhaps both- as your poem steams on and on across the world.. seeing and feeling so many emotions as if part sage, part herald. You write with amazing dignity.. thank you for saring and for being a true guide, Ty..

[Ty]

Your words absolutely resonate deeply.This is an attempt at a 360 degree perspective of everything. Almost everything. Thank you for dropping in.

[Nariko]

Another well-done poem! I always feel touched by them!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Herculean strength, colossal engagement, a masterpiece of mind & soul.

Regards,
Al

[Ty]

As I'd hope to have reached someone. You solidify that. I appreciate your dropping in.

[Ric Miner]

What an absolutely fantastic use of flow and imagery. I was hooked by the second line. I'm So glad I happened upon this poem!

[Ty]

Just seeing this! Absolutely appreciate your dropping by!

[issa]

This is incredibly inspiring. I have so much admiration for your writing, it really has the ability to move people. Great piece!

[Ty]

I've done my job then! Thank you so much.

[Tracey~]

This is a grand write. A story well worth sharing. There is so much emotion packed inside.. Well done.xo

[Ty]

Ah, can't thank you enough. Much appreciated, Tracey!

[Jiya]

A Poem is nothing until and unless you breathe in emotions in the gaps between each and every word.
It's fantabulous! Keep writing!

[Ty]

Even in your review your words are poetic! Can't thank you enough.

[Jiya]

Your writings are impeccable, I really want you to teach me the secret of your perfection. It's like how can i even review your writings

[Jes' Pi]

I don't want my review to be long, because all my worlds have the same meaning: very beautiful.

[Ty]

Even one word would stretch for decades. Much appreciated Miss.

[Jes' Pi]

you're welcome

[Carol Cashes]

"Headache of heartache"

Yaassss!!!! Seldom are the two connected as a part of the same condition.

I, too, wonder if you have traveled to all these places you reference. If so, what fantastical places and people you must have met!

I believe you have, for you write with authority regarding these places and was able to connect them all not with geography, but with the human responses to disaster referenced in your final lines. This is quite a gem, Ty.

[Ty]

Ah, your energy is radiating through the page! Much appreciated. As I told Annette, I can't claim all places! And yes I thought it was the right time for this piece. Please drop in again!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What a magnificent panorama this poem is Ty! Have you really travelled so far, to all those exotic places? I envy you that. You must know the true magnitude of the natures of man and creatures and the earth itself. Yes, ignorant metropolitan minds abound. Love your eloquent, evocative, intricate and interwoven exotic imagery, the coordinates of your sacred places. Yes, Thank God for the few who suffer selflessly to save the many lost in all the magnitude of magma. Master Class vision and poem Ty. Kudos!

[Ty]

Words that continue to resonate, uplift, and inspire! I can't claim I've been to every single place. Some conversations and experiences evoke vivid images that should be regurgitated back in stories and words. As always, please continue to drop in. Thanks!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are se welcome friend Ty!