heaven let me in

A Poem by Tumi

heaven let me in

for I am worth to be

I a righteous being

through the account of my life you shall see

for I always visit the place of his majesty

each initial day of the week

never am I frail

never succumbed to sin

even the devil failed to me

worthy am I to be here

let me in oh ye host of heaven

open now the gates of heaven

for a righteous man comes

ready to see the lord

for holy was I all my days on earth

even till my last breath

cleansed are my heart

straight was my path

let me in

oh ye host of the holies

never shall a righteous one be out

for I should be the first their in

why are now the gates of hell turned against me?

I am always sin free

worthy am I to see

worthy am I to be in

save me oh ye

from the demons that are come to torment me

and drag me through the gates of darkness

gate of hell

a place of lament

not even the strongest can tell

filled with sorrows and teeth gnashing

built for those with regrets

shall a righteous be punished

for I see now that I’ve been wearing a stain gown

© 2024 Tumi

Author's Note

remember eternity

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you are a natural born poet it gives me goosebumps. I was breathless it was written so beautifully; every description, every narration, every part... I took my breath away. I also have a poem called "best creature" and the whole poem reminded me of the last part (of course yours is definitely more sincere and written with more natural talent, no doubt)

"God if you are here, you know i'm matter
i'm not like who i was, i'm way better
i can make a change give me a chance
i'll be your best creature
your best part."

I'm so mad at myself for not knowing enough English to tell you how much I love this poem, I hope I can only make you feel that
I felt something inside me break at the last part. this was the best i've ever read, i'll keep watch here in the meantime.