YOUR LOVE

YOUR LOVE

How much did you love me?

Did you love me so much?

You could skip breakfast

Or give me your lunch

 

Was your love so much?

As the sand of the sea

Or hot enough

To warm my tea

 

Is your love

As fresh as a flower

Soft and gentle

Strong enough to make one cower

 

Is your love as a precious pearl?

Attracts things

Strongly like a spell

What everyone wants to see

 

Is your love as cool?

as cold

Is it really true

Or just bold

 

Does your love lie

In my eyes

Or comes through

that lovely smile

in your chin

 

Is your love big

Enough

To hold my heart

Is it strong as much

Or wide as such

To take my heart.

 

Author's Note

Feel free
what do you think?

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Thank you for sharing, Tumi 🍷

Your lines are like flower petals being picked one-by-one, asking, "She love me? She loves me not?" Not knowing on which the last petal might fall.
Hopefully, each of your questions will be answered, "Yes!"
Good thought and creativite flow within your words.

A heart-touching work; nicely presented, Syr Poet … very much enjoyed! ⁓ Richard🖌

[the only critique I might offer is to add a space between title and first line] : )

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review
i' m happy you enjoyed reading

[Marie]

A lot of questions asked in this very stimulating write, Tumi. I love the layout of the poem, it is very artistic! I also like how the poem flows so smoothly and feelings are very nicely expressed. I like this poem very much, it is beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing, Tumi...

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review

[Marie]

Always most welcome...

[Ken Simm.]

I certainly feel this refreshing poem. It is beautifully written.

[Tumi]

Thanks.for the kind review

[Arundass TP]

Nice song of love. Nice work.

[Tumi]

thanks for the kind review