Enchanted by your Gaze

“Enchanted by your Gaze”

 

In every eye, I wander lost, seeking  your gaze,
Through burning nights, I search, longing for your gaze.

 

I haunt each nook, every hidden, creeping place,
My eyes linger, curious, to catch your gaze.

 

You look unaware, while I watch from afar,
Finding joy in shadows cast by your gaze.

 

Though you turn, blind to these stirring feelings,
Sweetness flows from each glance within your gaze.

 

Your laughter afar clings close to my heart,
Binding me, enchanted anew by your gaze.

 

Time and again, I’m caught in your stare,
Enticed by the light that lives in your gaze.

 

I search for sunrise resting deep in your eyes,
Bewitched by the gentle smile in your gaze.

 

I crave beams of moonlight dancing there,
Rising, falling like tides in your gaze.

 

Your eyes, a treasury of rarest stones,
Love glistens bright and warm within your gaze.

 

Beauty, unmatched, blooms like the rose anew,
Unfolding, timeless, in each of your gaze.

 

Author's Note

feel free, My first time trying the GHANZAL
CRITIQUES?
well embraced

Reviews

[Skylar Lighten]

That is so good! romantic, immersive, and elegantly structured, making it easy to get lost in! Absolutely love this!

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Excellent, my friend.

[Marie]

An eloquently penned poem filled with longing for the simple sighting of the poetesses' beloved. She searches for him here, she seeks him there, just to see his fixed look. She finds his laughter enchanting, his smile magical, his persona sacred. His handsomeness is unmatched, there is nobody in the whole world like him in any way. An amazing write. I like the repetition of words and the layout of the poem. The title draws the reader in to read the poem, it is an excellent choice. Excellent depiction. Lovely work, Tumi...