Love

“Love (SIJO)”

Love, a beaming light that forever lights aflame my heart.
Lust, as cool as autumn's frozen palm that eases burden’s harsh hold.
Your love, both a burning ice, strong as steel, brings me to light.

Author's Note

Feel free, first time I'm trying the Korean SIJO

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It must be those cold showers that makes lust feel so icy. I've never seen this form. Interesting.

[Tumi]

Thanks alot sir, I'm glad you found it interesting

[Marie]

Love finely penned! Thank you for sharing...

[Writergurl]

This is one amazing write here!

[Tumi]

thanks for the warm review

[Dave W.]

Really good Tumi, love and lust working in tandem, good stuff. Thank you for sharing

[Tumi]

thanks a lot, i'm glad you enjoyed reading

[John the Baptist]

Odd, I have always thought of lust as blazing hot.