You Turn Me On

micro flash fiction

I relish the instant you enter, dropping your clothes haphazardly on the floor. I get turned on by your very touch, the way you handle me. I delight in caressing your slender form, savoring every inch of skin exposed to me. I relish the complete abandon of your movements under my taciturn gaze. However, I despise the moment you touch me again, turning my knob, effectively cutting off the flow of water raining down on you.

Reviews

[Woody]

a very nice twist. haha. short and sweet.

[The Violent Wolf]

Hehe thank you :)

[Marie]

Very good; nice twist. I see no reason you should give it a Mature rating. Nothing offensive or purient is said.

[The Violent Wolf]

Thank you (:

[Lyn Anderson]

This is very slick. The form is excellent, and it is very sexy. So sexy, in fact, you might have to slap a Mature on it.

[The Violent Wolf]

haha thank you :D