Too Late To Save

She wonders why no one listens,

he wants to hold her close,

She sits on the side of the road alone,

He wants to sit with her,

She wants some one to stop her,

He goes up to her to make sure she is ok,

She doesn't want anyone to see her, so she runs,

He tries to go after her for a little while

She goes to the bridge were no one will find her,

He fallows her to the bridge,

She has planned this for awhile,

He shouts to her, pleading that she stop,

She says it's too late,

He runs to her,

She jumps and her body stops with a jolt,

He sees her body lifeless, he was too late

Reviews

[Jeannear]

very sad poem but nice structure and well written

[Jeannear]

very dark and sad piece but good structure.....nice job

[Sarah]

thanks, this is written in a very dark time in life, supposed to pull at the heart. thanks for your comments

[Jeannear]

your welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your poem is sad even though he did everything right he still could'nt save her:(

[Sarah]

yea, this is a poem of despair, and supposed to end tragic thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[BubblingMe]

This is very very sad, but I always wonder how it feels like if I will do that, just jump from a bridge or something and end my life....but I'm to afraid to do that

[Sarah]

ik. i do to however i know i cant because the few people who care would be hurt. thanks though.

[BubblingMe]

Yes I have the same thought ;O