Unmanageable

Why is it that my heart is unmanageable?

Crushed and bruised,

Millions of bits lay on the floor,

Stomped on, spit on by everyone around,

Why is it that my heart is so scattered?

I shouldn't love him anymore, but do anyway,

Lost in directions,

My heart is scattered,

Why is my fear so Unmanageable?

Feeling that I will lose everything,

Oh, wait, I already have,

Afraid of being alone,

Lost in a current of Guilt,

Sweeping me away off my feet,

Thinking sacrifice was worth it,

Obviously for me it was not,

Now I am here left with this unmanageable heart,

Were only one could tame it,

Now that one is gone,

Left me like a ghost in the wind,

Why my taming love,

Why have you put my heart to death?

And left my unmanageable heart alone and crying?

Reviews

[Bohrium Guy]

Sometimes being caught in a place is a good lesson to learn. However opening your heart and mind to events is the key to end the cries of being alone inside. A hand if you will, friendship or just words lift a soul up to function. Your poem is beautifully displaying a hurt and ache for something mutual. A understanding and deepness yet you found scattered dreams and jaded thoughts. I think this poem speaks volumes in imagery and emotions. Great write!

~Rob~

[Sarah]

Well wow, i... Thank you. This was a really hard time period for me.... And well just thank you

[Bohrium Guy]

Maybe its time to end the hard times and look forward to fields of flowers and sunshine.... Just saying.

[Jeannear]

beautiful piece....this really hits home with me....good job

[Sarah]

thanks so much. my heart feels lost and there is so much to put only so few words.

[Jeannear]

your welcome and I completely understand