The Pain

Life holds me in a disadvantage,

Hopeless and dead,

I have inflicted pain to ones I love,

My selfishness had made me lose you,

my heart is ash,

Broken and abused,

I let it go freely and it's been used,

I wish the pain would go away,

The hurt in others faces that has been placed by me,

the pain is like a snake bite,

stings and hurts like hell,

But after awhile your body goes numb,

You no longer feel the pain,

you no longer face reality,

And soon you are no longer,

The ones against you feel victory,

The ones who cared are weeping,

And you are no longer caring,

Lost in the entrapment of your own grave,

feeling no pain and lost with insecurities,

it tears you up,

like a lion after taking down pray,

It eats you alive and spits out the rotting bones,

like you are some sort of dinner to be had,

Pain is no longer part of you,

it is you,

engulfed in dreaded darkness,

only thinking that you can escape,

but that is only a thought,

 when in reality you are sentenced to life in misery!

When you think it all gets better,

Its all a lie!

that's all life is!

cant you see>?!

life is a lie in front of another lie,

So who is to say that you are who you think you are?

Author's Note

this is just me letting my heart spill out, so sorry if there are grammatical errors.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Reflections of life in general and pain in particular. A very powerful poem...Bravo.........

[Sarah]

thanks for your kind words. it was just a time were i needed to let my heart go.

[Sami Khalil]

Good. You are welcome...:)............

[TheSadOne]

im so sorry thats how you feel

[Mary]

Hi there tweet :)

It sounds like the subject is feeling rather self indulgent (life holds me at a disadvantage) and guilty (reflects on the pain they have caused) for what they have done to their loved one. It then transitions into analyzing them and their fate with a finality that is rather dramatic. I'm not sure why the subject thinks their loved ones life is all a lie, perhaps it is realistic to say the subjects love for them was all a lie.

Anyhow, well done.

[Sarah]

Im not sure it was just how i was feeling, that the best thing about free writing it can turn out to be anything. thank you.