Finally beautiful

The shell may say one thing untill you examine it close, don't let your eyes device you....

Anxious for the day
Never giving up
Open to many new opertunities
Regret nothing
Xtream level of perseverance
Illustration on what someone should be
Always happy

Bull headed when it comes to anything,
Usually strong and dependable
Loyal and understanding
Independent to a fault
Michevious and deviant
Incredibly irritating
Always hiding

Here I am finally beautiful...

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

You be such a unique holy goddess! Loved the word: Xtream. Quite fascinating. Very nice creation you've come up alongwith the thread of your new and modernative thoughts. Great stuff!

[Sarah]

thank you kindly as for a holy goddess thats a little hahaha well i dont know about that

[Adam Adams]

"Holy Goddess" basically wrapped in guise of "Lady Of Beauty", who speaks the heart beautifully ... in the end of your poetry, you swagged with, you're beautiful .. so it expressing, you be "Holy Goddess" - the one encounters the pain, but gives love; one who counters the anxiety, but, of course, savors the faults in stars (bewitched with uncertainties of love). In simple words, your poetry expressing or rendering a great message to writers/readers that no matter how ravaged pain one has in his life, they shan't forget the beauty they're deep in their heart to get healed along... with excellence, moreover, the metaphor of your poetry's passed through the thrones of her life but still, besides it, she's saying, in the end, she's beautiful... so, yeah, you be or your "metaphor" be kinda "Holy Goddess" who tastes both pleasure and pain but well transplant that all in beauty of peace. Kinda fascinating.

[Sarah]

uhhhh.... wow. i didnt realize one would get that idea or well all of that. but the thing is there are two interpretations of this one piece. look at the lines and stanzas they in themselves tell a story but the last nine is the last message of both endearing thought provoking attributes. bu thank you kindly for sharing that. to find that kind of thought provoking ideals it warms my heart.

[Adam Adams]

Well, yeah ... you be right, I had actually no answer or was just wondering what you reply to your question, in the wake of your holy words, since you just stunned: "What's that holy s**t??" Lol
So, I just thought, why don't stir or add some extra ingredients to soothe you heart ... so yeah, it was all .. hope it works! lol

[Sarah]

well then thank you. it did help and make me smile. i appreciate it.

[Bohrium Guy]

Excellent visualization of how someone should see themselves and events that come into play. Excellent write and imagery. Thanks for sharing this piece.

~Rob~

[Sarah]

Look deeper.... Look in the hidden meaning...

[Sarah]

A play on words so to speak

[Bohrium Guy]

If I didn't know better I would say your trying to tell someone something....

[Sarah]

If I am is it known, or is it still a shadow ever present but never seen...

[Bohrium Guy]

Gotcha! Didn't think about that and how clever....