I Wish (me and you)

I wish I knew what you were thinking
I wish I could read your mind
I wish that we were together now
I wish I could call you mine

I wish I could make you understand
I wish I could make you see
I wish that I could be with you now
I wish that you were here with me

I wish I could tell you how I feel
I wish I could tell you I love you
I wish you would look me back in the eyes
I wish you would say "I love you, too"

I wish I didnt have to only dream of you
I wish I could be with you all the time
I wish I could stay in your arms forever
I wish I could say all the things on my mind

Author's Note

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Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Wonderful. I enjoyed all of the emotion in it and I can tell that it is true and that you are true to your heart feelings. Whoever this person may be, i'm sure he would be lucky to have such a girl as you. I know how these feelings are, and they are the ones that keep us thinking and constantly wondering about the other. And these feelings could also drive us to the brink of insanity if they aren't figured out sooner or later.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. I like the repetition in your poem. Wishes will evaporate into the breeze if we wait and watch too long. I like the emotion and desire in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote