Mom

Some moms will love you even before you take your first breath on earth .

Some moms will shun you after the  very first breath .

She suffers for you, gives her flesh for you enduring immense pain .

She will love you no matter what you do .

It is ultimately your own choice to acknowledge her sacrifices and suffering .

Will you ? or Will you not ?

The choice is yours .

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the second line and where you were going with this...the contrast of moms...would like to have seen that carried throughout the poem...

the back and forth. such a good idea...and then the good moms would win out.

jacob

[beautiful dreamer]

aw finally a mom poem. mom's deserve more poems. thanks for writing one! :)