Unseen Hours

Unseen Hours

 

not sleeping,

 

has never

even given

 

me anything

touching towards

 

tomorrows

unseen hours

 

4-11-08

Reviews

[vanishing]

Thats's exactly right on
as in not sleeping
has a way of blending days togther
I really liked how you
captured the meaning here
Minimal wording as can be

[None]

Here's hoping you rest well in the future! Wonderful poem here. A good way to sum it up and very poetically.

[Norma J. Jessee]

This is one I can certainly relate to not sleeping. Sometimes I sleep too much but mostly its not enough.

Beautiful.
Another favorite.

[Poeticpiers]

terse verse at its best