Have a Heart

Have a Heart

 

don't go makin' problems,

 

so what if he shot

your poor dog,

 

then punched-out

your ol' ill mother,

 

after burnin' down

you place...

 

don't you have a heart

for those criminally insane

 

5-4-08

Reviews

[Pj]

At first (and I'll be honest) I laughed like a mad woman...but then I re-read it. You're not just speaking about those "criminally insane" you're speaking about anyone who is different....you're speaking for everyone, in essence.
I don't want more detail, I love the bluntness, the rawness in the words and I'm starting to fall in love with your writing. It's not lengthy but it gets the job done!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

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lol, that was funny
Well done!

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

You can add a bit of detail to this and make it a KILLER poem. See notes.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Nope. Kill them all and let God sort them out, that's my policy. I'd have a bullet with his name on it.
Well, you asked. lol I know, I know, its satire. (smile)