Intricately Placed

Intricately Placed

 

 

she heard

the chant,

 

as it

flowed across

 

the water...

 

leaving her

mind open

 

to anewed

blossoming,

 

and the

radiate scent

 

of tomorrow

 

left her

eyes soggy,

 

with hopes

and dreams

 

all so

very

 

intricately placed

 

11-19-07

Reviews

[vanishing]

james.. I thought your poem
"longing for winter's kiss was it
but you spotted this poem
with the pen balancing on the paper
I always enjoy when the poem title
reflects the wording itself.
romantic and intricately placed detail
is how i would have to fully
percieve this. very nice job

[[untitled]]

Very unique style. Enjoyed it lots. Thank you for sharing.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Quite beautiful, thank you for sharing. debileah