The Goodbye Strangers Poem

I am the man who never was.
One minute I'm here.
The next I'm gone.
Nobody knew what I was working on.

 

I was here, but now I'm gone.

Will I find something new to shine upon.

Will I find salvation, when the day is done.

Wayfaring in the midst, where moonlight cries.

Should we find the time to forget the past?

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

Its funny because I wrote a "Hello Stranger" poem a few years back.
Yours is very well written and I enjoyed reading it

[Vinod Kumar U K]

But He knows kike it.

[Sweets]

This is great!
It has a good flow!
Nicely done!

[Linear]

What Judy said......enjoyed :0)

[Judy Ponceby]

Gosh, and we've only just met! :) Very nice rhythm and rhyme, and a bit on the mysterious side :)

[Marie Harrison]

Very clever...something great of course.

[sarah]

interesting

[Tate Morgan]

If you wished anonymity I think you managed that