With Every Step

My first love poem.

With every step,

the end seems further.

Seems I can't take,

my life any further.

Because all I do,

is never enough.

And all I try,

just can't be enough.

But beside you,

I've found the answer.

I need no dilemma,

to push me forward.

Walking down the street

we've found the answer

We can be as we are,

slowly walking forward

And that's why, you'll always be,

less distant than a memory.

Reviews

[Maan]

Decent words, decent meanings. A good poem overall. :)

[Tate Morgan]

I think this is probably the most intriguing of your works so far

[M Garcia]

Great write. Powerful.

[sarah]

This is so sweet :-) I really liked this

[Marie Harrison]

Very sweet love poem.
But beside you,

I've found the answer.
I need no dilemma,
to push me forward.
Walking down the street
we've found the answer
We can be as we are,
slowly walking forward.

Nice!