Vivid dream

I felt like putting some humor for Helena's contest "When Dawn's left hand ..." :)))

 

Vivid dream

 

 

 

I say “Hello”!

You say “Good bye”!

“I was dreaming when Dawn’s left hand was in the sky”!

All I could see was its shadow

Forming a dance that said “bye bye”.

 

Still half asleep I responded

Waving my hand … waving up high!

Trying to reach it … released a sigh

I tried so hard … from my bed I fell

My hand still waving … waving “bye bye”.

 

In shock I then open my eyes

On the ground I was still wondering

What pushed me there … was I sleeping?

Looked at my hand … it was waving…

Dawn gone ;  the sun therefore replaced.

Reviews

[Suelou]

Wow! This is fantastic.

[Helena]

Thanks Nassira....now I've got that Beatles song drumming around in my head!!

Loved the humor and what a great take on the contest phrase.

Thank you for submitting this delightful poem to the challenge.

Love and Light
Helena