The glimpse of a dream

 

The glimpse of a dream

 

 

Flying … over the oceans and streams

Gliding… majestically carried away by the winds

Playing… hide and seek behind fluffy clouds

Sliding… unwary of the watchful eyes of crowds.

 

Feeling… the sensation of height

Following… an imaginative twilight

Gathering… the edges of North, South, East and West

Unfolding… the path of the adventure quest.

 

Rising… with the sun at a defined time

Appearing… by the moon and on stars climb

Jumping… reaching the top of Mont Everest

Hugging… the joy and love we can all attest.

 

Achieving… the goal of my existence

Adorning… myself with fulfilling experience

Dreaming… is a world away from which I feed

A dreamer’s dream is my way to succeed.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This is WONDERFUL!

The way you've formatted your poem, the words you've put together in such a superb way... the entire post... is truly wonderful.

'Achieving� the goal of my existence
Adorning� myself with fulfilling experience
Dreaming� is a world away from which I feed
A dreamer's dream is my way to succeed.'

A bery lovely four line ending...

Thank you, thank you for sharing.

[Helena]

Wow, very good indeed. Excellent in fact! This had so such energy coming from
it. Very visual, creative and beautiful! Pen on my sister!

Salam
Helena

[Suelou]

This is a wonderful poem you wrote here. I like the way you wrote it. Thank you for entering the challenge.