Said in 10/40

I wanted to see where my muse was going to take me for Tovli's 10/40 contest ... that's all :)

 

Said in 10/40

 

 

The outsiders are smiling again!

Flashing their titles here… throwing their handshakes there…

While the whistles of the crowd scattered by the rain

The pestilence of their power like a dress… but bare

And the onlookers are all smoked again!

Reviews

[Helena]

Nassira this was fantastic. So well written and flowed so well
even thought the 10/40 puts certain limits on our muses',
you would never think that this was the case, in this very
good piece of writing. Well done poetess!
Thank you for entering Tovli's 10/40 this week. Hope you will
come back for the next lot!

Helena :)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Quite well done! I love the way you interwove Tovli's words with your own. Not so easy to do.

Sal

[Suelou]

Wow! This is great.

[SilentDream]

Nicely done Nassira :)
It Is interesting to see where those given words take us!
So glad you joined in

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream