The Mind's Eye

Journey outside your mind

Explore the shadows of another place

Enlighten the mind

Make an unknown a familiar face

Navigate new territory

Grace your presence upon the new

Discover a new perspective

No mental boundaries surround you

Embrace the uncomfortable 

Let go of your routine

Open your mind's eye

Think the now seen

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Many of the great writer's and musicians saw beyond their norm. Can make you go mad. I believe people who saw too much. Must control it or go mad. We use a very small percent of the mind. If we used more. World could be a better place? I like the poem. Open the door to a good conversation. I believe if we open the mind more. What we believe is important. Would not be. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nolo Segundo]

I like this-- I only wish more people follow the call of the final lines.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Open your mind and allow the truth to come in. See the world in a whole new way and allow your creative juices to flow. A lovely write and rather thought provoking.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is gorgeous piece I love this :), your classic touch is exquisite. Love every words of it. :) keep writing!

[quinfinn]

life is all lessons and acceptance. there is no growth without compromise and understanding. this is what i gleaned from this captivating write. you are on a roll....

[kublakhan27]

You'll never know how far you can go if you don't step over the edge...nice piece :)

[A. H. Pinley]

Our comfort zone always feels safe. Venture a little expand the horizons.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Keely, You again repeat a word (mind) with little added value. The final line withered the piece as it is largely nonsensical and lacks poetic merit. The concept of the poem is good.