Let Them Fall

Don't hold back your tears

Go ahead and let them fall

Release the pressure of your pain

Flush your mind of it all

Let them fall

Let them pour

Let them fall some more

Let the waves in your eyes smooth your inner shore

Cry a river if you need to

Let your passion be the flow

Cry like you're alive

Let your tears be how you know

Let them fall

Let them be

Let them flow free

Your tears like your heartache are only temporary

Reviews

[Elle Thompson]

I would break up the two longest lines.

[Jonathan Biswell]

very nice holding things in can only damage yourself

[John F Carver]

If anyone knows its you girl.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I can completely relate in this piece. Brilliant!

[A. H. Pinley]

Tears the natural reliever of pain. Nice work!

[kublakhan27]

Beautifully stated...sometimes we just need an affirmation from someone that it's okay to cry...

[Jack...]

Very uniquely written and wonderful theme.

[Veronica Chandler]

Very good advice and a very well written piece you have penned here.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another nice flowing piece Keely. Oner minor suggestion:
Let them flow free

drop the free!

[Phoenix]

well done