Killing Me Softly

Though killing me softly

I'm trying to move on

Doing everything right

Still ending up wrong

Broken in pieces

Held together by a prayer

Hope is with me here

Faith is elsewhere

Waiting in vain

Is waiting too long

Though killing me softly

I'm still loving you strong

Reviews

[Mark]

'Hope is with me here/ (but) faith is elsewhere"
This is a great image.
I've now red two of your pieces and am stymied as to why so many are reading them, but no one is reviewing or commenting.
I might suggest reconsidering this piece's title, though, as there is a copyrighted song by Roberta Flack with that title. Perhaps "Waiting Too Long", or simply, "Elsewhere"?