Just a Moment

If only for a moment the whole world could see

All that I find beautiful and what means the most to me
If only for a moment a light could shine down on
All the things that before a shadow was cast upon
Just for a moment, those who have turned a cold shoulder,
Could experience a new perspective from the eye of a new beholder

Reviews

[Joe]

Ahhhh Cool Passionate Write!
Bravo Keely! :)

[David Scott]

Empathy... To see things from anouther's perspective. Some have the gift/curse. ha.
Fine write here.

[emmajoy]

A gentleness of words which could lead to the most beautiful bright beginning.
Other's new perspectives very often remind us how.why.what.where.when and how

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem...:)