Beforecast

A tortured soul; imprisoned by recollection
Haunted by the happened
Nothing escapes; no sunlight gets through
In her finest hour, she says
 "This moment would make the perfect memory if it were raining"

Reviews

[jinxxnij]

"This moment would make the perfect memory if it were raining"

I want this on a t shirt!

[Jonathan Biswell]

like how your poems are short and simple yet explain so much

[Faith]

Simple and beautiful, well done! I loved the last line, especially.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Excellent read and write. The last line was perfect.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

brilliant little piece of writing...what a closer, that last line...

so let it rain and this would be a perfect memory...because my memories are so cloudy anyway...and i won't see the sun, even if it is out.

[MoriartyMesa]

This should be a welcome to my mind. Nice

[Jack...]

Very pleasant to read and appealling to the mind.

[Sabbih Hossain]

Rain has always been a part of me as am imprisoned by recollection of haunting memories. Nice one, indeed ...

[Hester Vane]

Simply beautiful