Born Again

You weigh heavy on my heart today

I feel you pumping through my veins 

I cannot describe this feeling

It is not something one easily explains

Like an emotion born again

A love thought lost and gone

Suddenly resurfacing from my heart

where it has been all along

From deep down within

This energy has been resurrected

Exposing the connection we have

and how its been effected

My mind is so scattered

I can't process my thoughts

My adrenaline in full circulation

My stomach tied in knots

Overflowing with anxiety

A million questions race through my mind

Every emotion full throttle

Twitterpated redefined

I can't ignore what is happening

I can only wipe the tears

falling from my eyes

As I taste the memories

True love never dies

 

Its born again.

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

I know nothing of the standards that "Real" poets use to review poetry, so I can only comment based on what I do know. I always thought (possible ignorance on my part) that poetry had no rules which is what I love so much about it. I use my writing to purge out onto page that which lives in my core; I use it as a vehicle to express and understand my experiences and emotions, a way to help me self examine if you will. I enjoy reading the works of other writers for their experiences and subject matter also helps me to delve within and see myself in the world around me. So with all that being said, this piece reached into the very core of my soul, touching and lifting my spirit. I found this piece exquisite and moving.

[jinxxnij]

I know this feeling exactly. I love the way your work always connects with the reader on some level. You're never in left field. I love that.

[Elle Thompson]

This would benefit from the addition of some commas, and I would shorten a couple of the lines. The rhythm is very balanced.

[redflutterby]

Beautiful poem Keely... and you're right true love lasts always.

[MoriartyMesa]

A review from me would not be able to express what many have felt in this piece.

[John F Carver]

Over and over and over again too!

[Jonathan Biswell]

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[Coyote Poetry]

"As I taste the memories
True love never dies"
I agree with the thoughts in the poem. Love can sneak-up on us and make us wish for things lost. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[kublakhan27]

The immortality of true love is a blessing and a curse...obviously you've presented the latter option in this piece...but it probably goes without saying that you're not alone with these emotions...so many people have had to live with this reality, and I am one...thank you Keely for sharing this piece :)

[Pete Langley]

As poetry, I found this emotive and fluent - a stream of feeling. You`ve avoided the forced nature of other pieces and I`m sure you are starting to understand how to produce the "music". Well done. P.