What's Left

You broke my heart into more pieces than it was made of...
Shattered baggage

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

Powerful, emotional, deep. I tell you who so ever has hurt you that badly doesnt know how much you cared for him. Its funny how the one whove been waiting for comes into your life as mine did, but I still love her without a doubt. if I could I would proclaim it to the world. Well done.

[Basu Gupta]

NICE WORK...damn true

[Alex P.]

Oh do I know this feeling all too well

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

So true, love the rawness and honest feelings in this write.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes Keely a great opening or closing line!

[John F Carver]

Great line... when someone does that it breaks your life as well as your heart... into more pieces than it was made of! What's left?

[Veronica Chandler]

Simply stated, as profound emotion! Splat...on the page...perfection.

[ChemicalMadness]

Definitely want more here....for my taste, if you're going to go with an ultra short piece, it's gotta really scream. I like the concept of shattered baggage, so would love to see you run with that.... Just my two cents.
CM