Tell It Like Its Fizz

Save your breath for the waters
Speak in bubbles of sound
Lies are heavy and certain
to weigh you down to drown
Be an orb of air with direction
Rise above and have purpose
Clear and crystal truth
will always reach the surface
Tell it like liquid
and tell it like it is
Talk the tingle of truth
Tell it like its fizz

Reviews

[Jack...]

I pulled the cap off of this one and it sprayed beauty all over me. Nice one KJ.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Keely, nice use of the liquid metaphor in a flowing and punchy poem with a clear message.

[Frieda P]

I like this fizz, and I also agree with Mark, since I glanced his remark. I think if you don't mean what you say then you should just shut the fook up, nice one Keely!

[Baby Ricochet]

They say the truth can set you free. I say the truth can piss you off

[Rita L. Sev]

The title drew me in to this cleverly written poem. "Tell it like liquid..." Great image there - let truth pour out and us up! Great write, Keely!

[Sami Khalil]

Positivism. Well done...:)

[quinfinn]

ah, the power of positive thinking. i like that!

[Ency Bearis]

Great food for thoughts, well penned.