Save The Last Word For Me

Like a two steppin' tongue tango
Our 'I love you's' danced
Words can find rhythm
When hearts are less advanced

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love how short and simple this appears, and yet behind every line is a deeper meaning. The dance metaphor is beautifully crafted throughout the poem. I love the play on "Save the last dance for me" as you use it -- "Save the last word for me" well done!

[Rita L. Sev]

Great piece, a lot said in these few lines. I love the opening simile!

[Sami Khalil]

Very nice...Well penned...:)