Got Glitter

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*                Shine                *

 Reflect

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My scrapes reveal my sparkle

I have glitter in my veins

****     Dripping drops   ****    Diamond like     ****

Bleeding out and listening

*               To the beating of my star               *

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*               Still glistening             *

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Reviews

[Ian Faraway]

How the HELL did you manage to format this? It's so awesome and intriguing. A little bit on the small side with the font side but I think it reinforces that message you're trying to send (maybe just a tiny bit bigger?). Anyways, loved how you formatted it and loved the short but very personal poem!

[Perkele.7885]

Very effective design for a very effective poem! Your talent precedes you nicely. By the way, are you bleeding here in color perhaps, helps my mental imagery! Forgive me if I am not my usual loquacious self. I have just read another of your poems and I am relaxing after a stunning mental erection!

[Mark]

Glitter....Very reflective words, illuminating your inner being. Nicely written!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I have to give you props for the design and the verse with this one...the title fits this to a tee...

[TL Boehm]

highly creative the presentation as well as the content. Well done.

[Astro]

Great concept and beautiful format. I like it, even if it describes blood and scars you have found a way to make it emotionally and visually valid.

[Tarry Franck]

Very creative. Great poem and loved the style.

[J. F. Charleston]

Haha! Great write! I love what you did with the stars!

[shallimarRose]

A= for creativity Keely... loved the style form and presentation. font is a bit too small for me on this laptop.. Great job. shallimarRose

[Sami Khalil]

A very creative write...Thank you for sharing...:)