Pull

Pushing
toward uncertain
Manipulating directions
Up, down and all ways
Hallways and sections
random
emotion
unstable
affections
No answers
many questions
Pushing
Mental erection
Go with gut protection
Sixth senseless and stupid
My suggestion
Pull

Reviews

[Mother Maggie]

There is a finesse to knowing when to push and when to pull. Growing up in a logging town, I used to compete in sawbuck competitions. It was a graceful and dangerous dance between my partner and I and the two man saw--tbe trick was to pull, then hold the tension as your partner pulled as the saw danced thru the log--teeth inches from upper thigh muscles...

[TL Boehm]

My suggestion - pull. This one made me smile because I am one of those obstinate types who catches her self pushing on a pull handle for all I'm worth and wondering why the door won't open. Sigh.

[gombeggar]

very nice wording here...kinda like bouncing ideas around in yer head feel

[MoriartyMesa]

Deep with something open to the reader, is there something more????

[Simon Welsh]

Nice! When I saw 'mental erection' and 'pull' I did chuckle somewhat.

[Rita L. Sev]

Reminds me of when you see someone pushing on a door clearly labeled "Pull" - they are the same in life, doing it as they wish, and making things more difficult... Great, Keely!

[Jack...]

If it won't go one way, always try the other. Very cool KJ.

[Zan]

The ending is great; its unexpected. Good job!