Bloody Knows

Her insides bleed a thousand voices
screaming red, unheard
She's hemorrhaging her feelings
dying with internal word
Behind her flesh walls
where the unspoken flows
Only the bloody knows

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Explosive poem!
I can easily relate to the pain you describe as your words help me feel it
It is only a sign of a well educated poet using little words to describe so many deep emotions
I hope you never stop writing and I hope you receive good the great credit you deserve
Cant wait to read more

[Neville]

Relatively speaking, a nice play with words & let's not of course forget meaning. Ragged and real, just the way I like em........................N

[Perkele.7885]

Great play on words and great word play. I'll betcha KeelyJane wrote this one! The poet knows!

[End.]

This was painful to read, and I mean that in the best way possible.

[Sundownsam]

An explosion of pain .... Very nice!

[Mark]

And this in a nutshell is why we write. So we don't keep the pain inside. So those wounds may bleed till they heal. So our feelings do not overcome us with internal injury. Very nicely done, and with such feeling!

[R J Askew]

People do things with a smile for the public, but what happens when they are alone with themselves afterwards? That's what you poem made me think. Well done.

[KeeD]

This is bloodcurdling, so good. The room left for thought to put a finger on what the poetess had in mind whiles writing this wow.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is a very profound and heartfelt poem .Well penned :)

[Richard Layne]

Wow, what a punch in the nose this is. Raw and in your face. Phenomenal play on words