Thought Process

Emotional tantrums
This tempest heart
Abysmal in feeling
Inspirations counterpart
My thoughts abound
Temporarily abstract
Awaiting expression
Matter meet fact

Reviews

[Perdition]

This one reads like a new breed of Haiku on fire. An image with every line. Certainly passionate to the closing line as I believe the pathology of our perceptions should be intended. A "PERFECT" title as well as overall beat/pace/message. Deserves a worthy spring porch; cricketed and wicker rocking-chaired as well. A piping hot coffee and far off stare right into the "temporarily abstract", Loved it...Thanks!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ashort poem with so much meaning.Well penned Keely Jane