Intertwined

When I wrap myself around you
Every crevice fits a curve
Like liquid flows our bodies know
When to blend and when to swerve
Up, down, around and through
Like cursive letters written slow
Every slit a perfect fit
On each side, above and below
When I wrap myself around you
As close to inside as can be
Intertwined and combined
Holding you is holding me

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

“Holding you is holding me”… Love can be just that… the Intertwining of two ♥️ Hearts… Beautiful romantic movements… gently, Pat

[Relic]

Ah, I approve of your sensual writing. There's no more honest writing than that which cums from the heart and experience. Nice job. 😁

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed moments to eulogise and savour as you have conjured up in this quite sensual and romantic write Keely-Jane.

[Richard🖌]

A sweet poetic moment shared, Dear Keely 🍂

Written in a language
only the most knowing,
passionately engaged lovers
can speak and understand … I think I do. ; )

Love both title and perfect picture, but the poem … ummm*
Beautifully spake poeting, Fine Poetess … hugs! ⁓ Richard🍃

(I can't help wond'ring if you'll respond, hoping you do) 😏

[MoriartyMesa]

This feel's like a mix of Pop, R&B, Dance, and techno. Honestly these would make great lyrics for a hit song.

[The Twin Arenas]

Every slit a perfect fit. I like this line.

[Kent Rawski]

Color me crazy my 1st thought was of a cummerbund I like the flow and rhythm the interspersing of words to describe your action creative write I like

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poem and I do agree. When two people fall together. Two bodies, becoming one. Perfection of the heart. Thank you Keely Jane for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Very powerful and very seductive. Perfect and lovely...

[Matthew Kult]

Romantically Fluid

Great Read

Matthew