Your Own star

You are right where you're supposed to be
This is your story in life's book
No matter the world around you
What they're doing
Where they are
You are right where you're supposed to be
Among the stars as your own star

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

A positive outlook on how we should live our lives. Not always easy and we have to remember that ' no man is an island' but we must find our own path. Well done for sharing your positive thoughts.
Take care,
Alan

[barleygirl]

This is one of my favorite things to think about life -- we are right where we are supposed to be, even tho so many others will tell us we should be this or that, something else, something they know nothing about, in regards to another person's life. I've read 3 of your poems & I love that you write about such a wide spectrum of hardcore realities from life. Some writers have a "trend" of writing in a certain mood or style or message, but I love a writer who mixes it up & covers many concepts along the way. I feel the way you look at one thing is similar to the way you look at other things -- always with intelligent introspection that doesn't make assumptions about life or other people -- just real honest sharing, which to me is the crux of good writing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Patricia Wedel]

The darker the night ... the brighter the Star.
We all struggle in the moonbeams and somewhere along the way we may discover the serenity of poetry where we can pen a poem where dreams come true.. you need to make a Wish before you have a wish come true. gently, Pat