unwritten

i wrote this when i was in third year high school i was 15 that time..im 17 now.

ice princess by day
fire goddess by night
paradox of life
enigma of the light
in the abyss of mind
perplexity of thy flight
tried to rest in oblivion
yet still losing this fight
the rest is still unwritten
and it gives me a fright

Reviews

[The Fatal Lover]

I loved it. Great job. =)

[SimplyDisastrous]

Excellent, deep write! =)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

finely tuned opening for a fairy tale of a darker bent~ love the exceptionally constructed lines which are set in a pattern to evoke extreme curiosity~

[Revolved]

Oooh love the rhymes in this poem! It's greeeeaate!! :D