unwritten(the sequel)

i wrote this a year after unwritten..hope you like it.

the bosom cracked open
but never did it glisten
the oblique sound followed
but never did it glisten
lie succumbed the deaf
truth never freed the theft
shadows filled the empty
moon became so lofty
the end is insight
and yes, i lost my fight

Reviews

[The Fatal Lover]

Terrific Job! I loved reading this. =)

[Cassiopia Summers]

Short, simple, and oh so true. (: Great write!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sounds like a solemn fall~ I can almost see a woman dressed in owl feathers with an owl mask falling through the branches of a giant tree~her body bent forward like a crescent~ that your poetic evokes such finely grained imagery speaks volumes about how well honed your descriptives are~

[Revolved]

Never thought there'll be a sequel to a poem, but as I said to the first poem It's GREAT!!! The rhymes are awesome :D Heehee two thumbs up!