smile

A Poem by heich

wrote this after tear..please review

a tale of forever
enticing vow forgotten
frigid soul broke
trapped in asylum
locked in vexed emotion
cast the black and white
let the pain linger
i forced a smile

© 2010 heich

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Robyn

ahh yes. the faked smile that we can all relate to at some point or another
nice work

Posted 15 Years Ago

Dream Weaver

This is a strong "haiku" Love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago

ScarlettTheDreamer

Wow an abstract and powerful poem with no blah...blahs. The last line was awesome. I really like this poem. Great job!

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on July 3, 2010
Last Updated on July 3, 2010

Author

heich

dipolog city, Philippines

About

i'm an undecided writer. i like to write things that i see..about love pain and such but i never really had any experience about those things..i enjoy writing poems and short short stories. there a.. more..