getting over

yeah..i love to write poems about love..but honestly..i never felt it yet..lol..send me reviews..

close thy eyes
hide thine smile
twas a love all was a lie

loving still
heart that feels
life's a waste
endless chase

close thy eyes
show thine smile
twas a love
now goodbye...!

Reviews

[Ashley Ree]

I actually adore this. Short Sweet and Simple
Your first line though I believe you meant to
say eyes. And to be honest, you didn't have any
punctuation throughout the whole thing, so
I wouldn't put it at the end either. Great work.