i need an answer

i'll be happy if you could give me some answers..though i cant give you the moon..lol

how can you let go when you are holding on?
you are trying to forget but you're staring at the phone
you wipe your tears yet you weep some more
you say you're ready but you closed your door
you smile at him yet you cry for the same thing
you start to laugh but you know you're faking
you're happy for him but not for yourself
you say it's over but can't take another start
you ended everything except that feeling in your heart
now tell me,
how can you let go when you're holding on?
if you find the answer,i'll give you the moon

Reviews

[Joshua Donahue]

really nice piece! i think it connects well with young females who are struggling with heartbreaks. and you captured the emotion beautifully and the the fact that you wrote the poem so that you were asking yourself that or your reader...well done!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you balance the scale of uncertainty poignantly~ the word interplay is a gorgeous see saw composition~ it is a most difficult emotional journey of letting go~

This is a beautiful piece. Well done.. hope you find the answer.

[Emily B]

no reviews? it's wonderful, let me know if you find the answers. Every time I think I have one, the questions changes.