temporary

this is for my friend nikko..she said she likes this..i also belive in this..please write reviews..i enjoy them..

the tears i cry.
the pain i feel.
the throb it brings.
these are temporary.

promises in can.
letting go of hands.
everything's undone.
all are temporary.

taring from afar.
wishing for a star.
restlessness of heart.
yes,it's temporary.

words in this paper
would die and wither
'coz  some things happen
when everything's temporary.

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

Beautiful write!

"promises in can
letting go of hands.
everything's undone
all are temporary."

The words flow like water and the emotions break the surface. Realizing that everything is temporary is a double edged sword; on the one hand if life is giving you bunches of "lemons" it's comforting to realize that soon you'll be able to make lemonade... but if life is smoothly moving along and everything's going well... it's quite worrisome to realize that it could all come unglued at any time.

I really like this - It's fantastic. Thank you for sharing :)

[J.S. Pua]

nice write..
liked the repetition..
good work..

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this is such an emotional poem!!!
I Love It!!!:-)

james:-)

[The Fatal Lover]

Wow. That is full of passion. I loved it. Great job. =)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very true indeed~ the only constant is change~ well written~

[Revolved]

Wow this is really good. I love how you put at the end of each stanza "all are temporary" Ah keep the RR coming! XD

[Cassiopia Summers]

The truth in these words is inspiring. You did well in portraying that and indeed, everything is temporary. Thanks for RR, (:

[Dream Weaver]

Everything is indeed temporary.
two things are for certain......
Death and taxes. This to shall
pass. Nice write.

[Poeticpiers]

life itself is transient always unfolding and becoming something new. Memories remain but even they soften with time

[Iota]

Most if not all things in life is temporary. Especially emotions so when I am really mad at someone I think to myself will I feel this way about them a month from now? Usually the answer is no, the anger would have gone away by then, so I pretend it is the future and I get over my anger much quicker. Wonderful write you have here, excellent.