hold me

tell me what you think..

pull me close and tell me things i like.
hold my hand and make me stay.
wipe my tears and make it right.
do anything in every possible way.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

That was beautiful!

[The Fatal Lover]

This is short. Simple. Cute. And perfect. I loved it. Great job. =)

[Iota]

I think this one is cute. It is romantic too. Sounds like love :)

[Revolved]

Aw this is so beautiful! Just four lines can make you have butterflies! Beautiful and short-n-sweet!

[Seerose]

Very cute. You describe this feeling with the perfect words. :) Great.

[Joshua Donahue]

short, sweet, and simple. i like it. it reminds me of something i would see on a Hallmark card. :)

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short, sweet, to the point. Good job (:

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
short and sweet..
good work..

[Ashley Ree]

I Love it.
It means so much, with not many words at all. Really, I love it. If I could add anything or say to make any changes at all, I would capitalize the first word of each sentence, and the word I. But you choose not to, it's no big deal at all. The words in the poem make it, not silly grammar things. Great Job, I love it.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I think it's adorable, it's from a lover to a lover it sounds like. (:
Keep up the great work, because I love it!