rain

lol..i just love rain..kinda confused if you would get the meaning though..lol

The rain reminds me of you.
It remind me of the things we used to do.
it reminds me why my heart was broke in two.
And yet i'm still happy that i do.

Reviews

[Michael of Gilead]

Cool

[Neisha Ann]

Short & sweet, and very amazing. =) I love it!

[The Fatal Lover]

Aw. I really loved this poem. Great job. ^_^

[Andrew Wright]

I love this poem. The rain can bring with it so many emotions. I can feel so much in each line.

[Randolf Ramos]

The rain reminds me of you.
It remind me of the things we used to do.
it reminds me why my heart was broke in two.
---- great lines here memories lingers in you, great.


Great i like your poem, touching the heart and soul.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Actually, I understand this completely. I love it. I love the rain, it makes me happy.

[Shin]

This was also short and good, rain brings longing, you used it well.

[Gracie-San]

Simple and sweet, yet very very effective! Great job.

[Revolved]

This is sweet and short! I love it! Excellent job!

[Roselyn]

Marvelous work! It made me smile :)