feel me

lol..just give me reviews..

the pen is my witness
this paper knows my distress
the words long for caress
yet no one would understand this

Reviews

[the_stoic]

the confession of a writer !!

[SimplyDisastrous]

Short but amazing.

[Neisha Ann]

This one speaks to me. It's very good.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Haha, again. It is short, simple, and absolutely darling.

[Sonali]

Nice thoughts,try to make your poems longer.Good flow of words,deep thoughts,nicely expressed.
this paper knows my distress --great thought!

[Shin]

I liked how this one kinda of rhymed, as I said before in other poems, short but sweet, nice work.

[Robin]

very nice , and i understand

[Revolved]

Hmm I'm not sure you actually thought this out... But it's actually... Good. Kinda like as if you're stuck on a writing and not knowing what to write. Good, excellent poem :D

[RTB]

great meaning and everything i would put "understands this" tho cuz it sounds more fluent to me over all that was great!

[Onyx_Rayne]

Sometimes... you just have to get something out from within. If you enjoy writing, often times that is the way you do it. Although it can be frustrating when you are unable to express...whatever it is you need to express.

I really like this piece. It's short and simple and the flow of the words is great. Also, it can mean many different things depending on who is doing the reading.

Fantastic work :)