feel me

lol..just give me reviews..

the pen is my witness
this paper knows my distress
the words long for caress
yet no one would understand this

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

Great write so trueful! sometimes when u write something on papper. U understand the msg while others have to figure it out! great job here! :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

oh but I do~ understand the intimate dance of the writer with the quill~the smooth paper~the keyboard waiting to be pressed in certain sequences to create something brand new~ this poem relates what is not easy to relate~ the exceptionaly innocent yet extremely in depth connection the creative mind experiences with everything tangibe and everything intangible just waiting to be given shape~superb writing~

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

'The words long for caress' doesn't sound right but still I felt something

[Dream Weaver]

Typo on the last line...it should be *one*
other then that a super haiku...

[Levin]

It makes me think of all writers and their tendancy and need to hide confusing and labryinthine emotion.

[The Fatal Lover]

That was very wow. I love your short poems. There my favorites. =)

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"the words long for caress
yet no ane would understand this"

{aww-every poet and poetess has said this on some dark night}

james:-)

[Dinesh Sairam]

The last line was sublime and not nearly a perfect ending. The first three lines were good. I'd say, when these thoughts come, hold on to them and put them in words when you have loaded up enough imagination :)

Kudos. Keep writing. :)