maybe

wrote it when i thought i liked a guy..i was totally wrong..lol

When you smile that smile i stop and stare.
when you laugh that laugh i wish you're here
then i close my eyes and whisper "maybe"
Just maybe you think of me

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

Awww.. sooo sweet! It has that " new love " feel to it. Which is always the best part of love.

This poem made me smile with remembering.

Very nice write :)

[Daydreamer54]

AW, very sweet! When you think of someone u love, I'm pretty sure they r thinking about u as well! Nice work here! :)

[Dinesh Sairam]

"when you laugh that laugh i wish you're here"

Er, you are seeing her laugh and how can you wish she were there? She's already there!

A short poem of longing.. :)

Keep writing.

[J.S. Pua]

short and sweet..
good work..

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

So sweet ! so short and perfect!!!

[Dream Weaver]

We all go through this stage in the beginning bunso,
Still and all a beautiful piece ;)

[Leanne Conway]

Awe, This sweet and wonderful. It's well written and I love it =)

[thedaydreamer]

Sweet. Someone wondering that the one she's thinking about, might be thinking about her too. :)

I think the "you're" in the 2nd line, should be "you were" here.
"I wish you were here"

[The Fatal Lover]

Aww. I loved it. Made me smile. Great Job! =)

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"then i close my eyes and whisper "maybe"
Just maybe you think of me'

{ahhh- the sentimental remembrance of love--wonderful poem}

james:-)